Comments on Fernham: Editor! Editor!

Ooh, funny footnotes rock. What an interesting opp...

2008-06-06T23:42:00.000-04:00

Ooh, funny footnotes rock. What an interesting opportunity, too, to write about someone so different from Virginia! wow.
Think of it as a pay-off for all the less humorous corrections you have endured, Anne, and take it as a free gift.(Has he got any more jokes, i wonder??)

Very smart thoughts on this, both of you. Thanks. ...

2008-06-06T15:05:00.000-04:00

Very smart thoughts on this, both of you. Thanks.

Although I haven't always been grateful for all the red ink spilt on my prose, I *do* cherish it now, believe me!

His is better because the word "it" is never as st...

2008-06-05T21:12:00.000-04:00

His is better because the word "it" is never as strong as almost anything else.

How wonderful that you and your father connect through writing. That's the way my mom and I were (before her Alzheimer's diagnosis). Cherish it.

Not sure if this is it, but I think that the word ...

2008-06-04T20:17:00.000-04:00

Not sure if this is it, but I think that the word successfully is useful because it underscores the irony, rather than being merely a dry reiteration of what the paper expounds upon. (And how many footnotes are dry!) Furthermore, did the reverse is clever because it plays off of the oppositional structure of the sentence; the second phrase is exactly that: a reversal. Instead of dry, it's wry. It is similar to how, when one tells a joke, you set up an situation and then deliver the punchline that is a reversal, something known but not expected in the context of the setup. The incongruity of the unexpected is what makes the joke funny. Similarly, I couldn't help but smile when I read his phrasing. That setup is pleasing. I don't know that I'm explaining this well, but I hope some of this makes sense.